Ok folks, I could use some help here! I started my comic for the telethon and just got the first page done. Unfortunately, after roughly writing the whole comic in my head I realized it's going to have to be about 3 pages long and it took my 1 1/2 days to finish this one page. Plus, I'll be away from my scanner this weekend so I have to have everything done by tomorrow. So what I'm asking is, do you guys think that this one page stands well enough on its own?
The next two pages were going to involve them using a tiny robot friend named "PayPal" to blow up the monster (In the spirit of Godzilla movies). But now that I think about it, I don't even know if the Web Comic Telethon will be using PayPal to accept donations, so using that joke is a bit of a risk.
What do you guys think? Does it need the next two pages? Any other comments about the comic itself? Does it look alright? Grammar ok? Please, constructive critism rocks.
