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Shire Le Buff
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« on: August 05, 2008, 09:24:27 PM »

City Paper is doing a reader submitted comics issue so I thought I'd shill them these pieces of shit.



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« Reply #1 on: August 05, 2008, 11:51:43 PM »

I don't get the first one, but the second one is great!
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« Reply #2 on: August 06, 2008, 12:22:28 AM »

I don't get the first one
its really, really punny

nice job elmo hi5
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« Reply #3 on: August 06, 2008, 05:02:21 AM »

It took me a while to get the first one, but when I got it, I realized it's the kind of lame punny humor that I love.
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« Reply #4 on: August 06, 2008, 07:24:16 AM »

So far the first one has taken people a couple minutes to get. I'm stressing a little bit about the colors, I think having all the different numbers and symbols different colors makes the joke harder to get.

The second one was really rushed and I kind of hate it.
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« Reply #5 on: August 06, 2008, 08:04:40 AM »

I just got the first one and it made me go "heh heh heh" out loud. Nice work Nick.
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« Reply #6 on: August 06, 2008, 08:23:01 AM »

Hehe love the first one. Second one is alright...good concept, maybe not the best execution. First one is gold though.
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« Reply #7 on: August 06, 2008, 08:55:18 AM »

Art People: criticism is appreciated.
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« Reply #8 on: August 06, 2008, 09:42:09 AM »

I still do not get the first one  sad
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« Reply #9 on: August 06, 2008, 09:44:01 AM »

The 'n' is a sexy 'n'. Get it now?
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« Reply #10 on: August 06, 2008, 10:06:55 AM »

I wouldn't worry about the colours. They aren't confusing at all. Also, I just had to explain the joke in that one to Ethan. But don't let that you worry you, Nick. Ethan's kind of retarded a little bit. He thinks its funny tho.
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« Reply #11 on: August 06, 2008, 11:57:22 AM »

I don't get it either. I think I have a vague sense of what its supposed to be, but I'm not sure and it makes me feel as equally retarded as ethan.  sad
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« Reply #12 on: August 06, 2008, 12:06:42 PM »

I think it would have been a better comic if they were all the same color at this point. I think the colors break them up too much that some people aren't seeing them together as a whole. Who knows.
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« Reply #13 on: August 06, 2008, 12:25:52 PM »

I like them both Nick. I think they're great.
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« Reply #14 on: August 06, 2008, 12:54:12 PM »

To those who don't get it:  If 9 shows up, you would have "7+n=9," thus creating a problem - a math problem.
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« Reply #15 on: August 06, 2008, 12:55:08 PM »

If you have to explain it it's not funny!
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« Reply #16 on: August 06, 2008, 01:29:47 PM »

Well having someone explain it to you is funnier than "...What???"
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« Reply #17 on: August 06, 2008, 01:33:51 PM »

That's not a very sexy n, Nick.
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« Reply #18 on: August 06, 2008, 01:39:33 PM »

I can't do sexy very well, it is my fatal flaw.

I will die because of this one day.

Maybe while belly dancing for a mob boss or something. I don't know.
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« Reply #19 on: August 06, 2008, 02:41:35 PM »

Aha! I get it. That is funny.
 
Wow, my brain totally wanted it to be 80 billion times more complicated.
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